Life is too short to do everything you desire.
Yet, long enough to grab any opportunity you can.
*Nice, powerful opening stanzas. Life definately is too short to do everything we want to do but we can always grab opportunities.*
Life is too fragile to let yourself get hurt.
Yet, pain is something we need to better ourselves.
*I like the use of fragile. We don't like being hurt but as you state pain is something we need to have had to to learn from those mistakes.*
Life is too complicated to try to understand.
Yet, so simple that we take everything for granted.
*Very true stanza.*
Life is too beautiful to let anything go unnoticed.
Yet, everyone dies having disregarded the things they discover.
*Another very true stanzas and I can't find any flaws with it.*
Life is too unfair to plan any outcome.
Yet, disappointment is felt on a daily basis.
*Yes, at times life is very unfair but we are always disappointed atleast once in our lifetime.*
Life is too unpredictable to set anything in stone.
Yet, a broken promise is always unexpected.
*YES. lol true.*
Life is too open to live and let go.
Yet, pure solitude only hurts you in the end.
*Very, very true. Everybody hurts, sometime.*
Life...

Nothing but a moment
*Such a truthful poem, with alot of emotion and inspiration, 5/5. Em*