I really liked the style of this piece. The way you portrayed the dominating female and submissive male and how he actually enjoyed her denying him access. 5/5, Em x

Good work!

I liked this... It was well written, and holds the readers attention to the end. Good ending too! Well done.

This is a confident woman at ease with her power over a lover who is content with his place in the scheme of things. And why shouldn't the woman take the lead?
Brave writing.

You sure this is fantasy? Great flow. Nice ending. I liked the rhyme and the rhythm.

Such wicked eroticism, she treads the thin line between love and cruelty.

"On the foot of the bed she bids him sit
Telling him to observe and not touch
Then slowly her body she begins to explore
Her actions making him ache so much"

Yet another Wow!
You are defintely the Mistress of Erotic poetry.

Reading your words makes me wonder how it would be to try this..I could see it all in front of me and you made it seem soooo appealing, ha ha.

Very well written, I loved it!

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Love it!

Very erotic
Made me think of a night
I had a few weeks ago
But in reverse
Like your style