Comments : An Ending Road of Lament

  • 14 years ago

    by miracle

    Wow....this poem hits me hard. this is exactly how i feel. great poem i love it...

  • 14 years ago

    by Max Krakers

    Wonderfull but sad poem, it's a bit long but that's not important. keep up the good work

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Well David you were not wrong in your profile you certainly put your emotions into words in this poem and I must admit I have been there and felt the pain many years ago now and I have a new life with a new partner who has given me joy and love so do not let life drag you to far down as there is gold at the end of the rainbow. Sadness has a price and the heart takes time to heal.
    A truly emotional poem wonderfully contrived as all good poems that come from the heart and emotions are excellent 5/5 Ray S
    PS I don't agree with Max it is just right.