Wow....this was super creative. Obviously this piece is unlike any other. I don't know why but I loved it. Maybe it was the randomness or the way it looks but I really enjoyed this. I have no idea what you were thinking and honestly that's the best part. This poem has a mysterious feel to it and asking you questions could ruin that. Wonderful job Nova. You're such a talented skittle slave :) *huggles* Nik

Very interesting poem, the thoughts/ message is intriguing, the style and layout is even more so, very thought provoking, the reader is forced to think as they read, which is a good thing, and the structure reflects the words.... I'm not sure if I would enjoy reading more like this though, to be honest I don't like it, its not a style for everybody, but is very creative which is what poetry is all about.

Oh my God Nova, you're going to give me a headache. Lol. This is something that would be fun for a teacher to put on the board and try to get the kids to figure out what's going on. Neat little experiment I must say. XD