I really like the images you pull into play here--"green pale eyes," "destitute, but unbroken," and "auburn huntress." It makes the writing come off the page.

This was really good...

"My heart laments, its ebon tears the nemo soul does sever.

For the auburn huntress sleeps now in the halcyon night forever."

so sad...but that was my favorite part.

So

This reads like a very famous poem. It should be made famous!

Like others of yours it evokes a scene and a story, a motive and a means. Write more on it?