I liked this piece, very powerful yet sad. 5/5. Em x

So very sad, Katie......

You really write well, that is for sure.
I only wish you could write something cheerful...
You are in my prayers, sweet girl. Feel free to pm me or email me anytime, alright?

God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

Loved the ending, great write! I updated the poem on my page you commented and rated was just wondering if you could go back and check over it again.. Just had to put finishing touches on it lol :)

Wow this is a brilliant write!
The flow is nothing less than perfect and the rhyiming flows through each stanza very nicely, I ah honestly supprised that this poem hasnt got more vote or comments!

youve created some Amazing imagery and I very much enjoyed reading this piece! 5/5 your a talented writter

Amazing xxx well done