Comments : The Assassination

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is somewhat on the dark side but sometimes that is life. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    Life can be like that at times. The world can seem chaotic and without meaning. It's for us to make sense of it - if we can. well done Sourav. You've expressed what we all feel from time to time.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    And there's a curfew in your head.
    Don't expect anything to change

    ^^ loved the metaphors used here...

    And I lean
    To see the decease that died
    Long ago -
    The death of mine.

    ^^ very powerful ending... and very dark write too...

    wonderful write...