This was a well written poem, with good flow and rhyme, small mistake 1st word 2nd stanza.
The concept of the poem is as old as time itself, you put a nice fresh spin to it, well done

Grant

Ok...i really like this poem...it is to the point and it not dragging on and on...like some poems ive read..and i totally agree with you...there are alot of people that fear love...and im one of them...so good job...5/5

I really liked the flow and style of this poem. It's got alot of truth in the words it speaks. Wonderful read, 5/5. Em x

Thanks Slash, i fixed the error you were talking about, and thanks for the support everyone =D

This has a very raw simplistic truth to it that i really like. There is no pussy-footing around it, it just is what it is and I really like it :) keep up the good work. 5/5
~Peace, Jules

I love your peom..
i likes the flow and style.
this peom is so true.

<3
Dominique

Awesome poem! Great flow! 5/5

You know Daniel ... I smile when I read your poem haha! I don't know why but I just feel so lovely and so in love like a child when I read your poem. Your poem is romantic and bring a sweet smell in a childish way that make people feel so in love haha! you know love is childish ^^ so its a great poem! I like it! Hope to see more poem from you!

I like it so much , it ex precess every bit of love for someone you truely love.
lets keep writing for everyone one to see.

You have taken an old idea and made it fresh and new. It depicts all that is in love, the searching, beginning and end. Well done great flow.