Comments : A Big Mistake...

  • 14 years ago

    by Alicia

    I loved your poem! It was really intense... I especially liked the stanza...

    "Beat me bloody
    Beat me blue
    Keep in mind
    I hurt you"

    It reminded me of a childhood rhyme, which I can't place, but I still loved it! 5/5 for the amazing job for getting your feelings across.

  • 13 years ago

    by Clown

    Beautifully written, I can feel the guilt and self hatred. It made me feel angry at myself, I loved it, and if its based on fact, then I do feel sorry for you, cheating is a horrible thing, but you can change, so dont let yourself down, just pick yourself up and say leason lerned, Il never do that again

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Sounds more like " I hate myself poem" than a "Sad poem", anyways, I always believe that any release is a beautiful release and this is beautiful, despite the angst, hate, anger and etc. etc so on and so forth :)