I like everything about this poem. Detailed and interesting. Great job i hope you win :)

"I wish there was a hint of light
to brighten the hole in my chest
I hope you're safe among the angels
forever shall you rest."

- My favorite stanza!

A beautifuly detailed poem. Very touching, with a satisfying end. Great write! 5/5

mandy :)

Not a bad write Nik! :)

=I see something in the distance
dancing beside the frosted moon.
My eyes identify stars
oh how they remind me of you.
*
Ohhh I like how you started the poem... however I'm not sure "identify" would be the right word. Just a thought.

=Golden and stunning
as they strike through the sky.
I wish I could just hold one
and maybe I'd have the courage to fly.
*
Last line seems a bit long? It throws off the poem a bit.

=I lay my head upon faded grass
and breathe in a fresh scent.
I remember being here with you
I miss the feeling of your kiss.
*
Vivid and beautiful! :)

=I pretend you're here again
singing to me like before
I would smile as we harmonized
but now I sing no more.
*
"I would smile as we harmonized, but now I sing no more" <<< I LOVE IT. :)
However, I think you could edit the first two lines.
"Pretending that you're here again,
Singing like before." <<< something like that?

=I wish there was a hint of light
to brighten the hole in my chest
I hope you're safe among the angels
forever shall you rest.
*
CUTE! Like mandy, this is my favorite stanza :)
"I hope you're safe among the angels
forever shall you rest."
C'est adorable! <3

=I never knew being alone in the woods
could make me relive the past.
You will never leave my soul
even though you're never coming back.
*
Conclusion wraps things up. :)

Great write :)

Such wonderful imagery portrayed in this piece. Wonderful job, well written. 5/5. Em

Awesome.loved it!!!

I lay my head upon faded grass
and breathe in a fresh scent.
I remember being here with you
I miss the feeling of your kiss.
^ I really wish this one would rhyme like the rest , but it doesn't exactly throw off the flow .

This portrays a very sad situation . Your feelings are very well exibited , and you can imagine being in the woods alone missing someone deeply very vividly . Really well done once again .. 5/5 .

Your word choice is no doubt great, the imagery and feeling are also there. Its great work.^^ however your flow tipped me off a little. it wasnt horrible or anything but it stopped my flow of vision in your great work