Wow. Wow. Wowww....
O_O
I really enjoyed this!

Fav stanza:
"Tears fall
No relief
Tears of pain
Tears of grief."

Very heartfelt, very real.
5/5 <3
-Athena

Cant run
Cant get away
Cant talk
What would I say?

Absolutely brilliant. I loved that stanza, 'can't talk, what would I say?' I have those dreams all the time, where all you can do is onlook, and you just can't wake up. Beautiful writing, keep it up xo

A great write. Yes... we all get those nightmares at times I think! And woh... I be glad to waken up when I do, Lol. You make it seem so real with your words. Extremely well written and expressed :) Excellent.

Honey;
I have it every time ii close my eyes ...

<|3

It's like my dream last night lol. Written well, 5/5. Em