Comments : Who am I trying to fool..

  • 14 years ago

    by esmeralda

    There's Always Someone Better Around The Corner..So Don't Worry

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I really like this stanza ...
    "Butterflies in my tummy
    Voices in my head
    pretending I don't love you
    is the biggest lie I've said" such an emotional stanza. I liked how you kept the flow, rhyme and stlye throughout, so much thought and emotion. I liked the ending, very powerful. The only hitch is in the penultimate stanza u spell **surely** ... "shurely" other than that beautiful written poem Very good job, 5/5. Em