I like to format, the message is clear that you have been hurt and now are getting over it. stay strong

Very romantic and lovely but sad.
I found it wonderfully composed especialy that idea of that one word in each ending of a stanza.
Love it

I THiNK THiS iS 0NE 0f My FAV0RiTESs .

Different format for a poem, but it works. Very good poem, 5/5

Try not to cut the sentences too much. it made perfect sense. i liked it. but you can improve the lines a bit ok.

*Val

Aye-May-Zing 5/5

I love your writing. all of it. keep up the great work...

your writing just really speaks to me...and im not suprised, seeing that we're both teenage girls; im 13, ur 14.

This is amazging I love it sweetie(:

5/5 from me....

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