Comments : Always Loving U

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I was a bit unsure about the structure but towards the end I began to like it. It's like a long stanza but it's more of a paragraph. I like that some words that you wanted to stand out were in capital letters..
    I loved the end: "But the fact still remained TRUE: Always thinking of you,and always dreaming of you. "

    Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Nicole Easton