Rlly nice poem, shame no1 commented :O

Wow.. this poem seriously almost made me cry.. When I say you're not alone, I mean it. My favorite part of the poem was when you mentioned, "I'm getting smaller now
dissolving in mid air
Tears streaming down my face
while you simply just stand there" that. How you feel so hurt, and the guy just does nothing. I've been in a similar situation. I also liked the part about unspoken words.. It's almost like saying nothing is really saying everything.
You captured the emotions of lost love perfectly. Good job at expressing it, - Kayla