The entire poem gave me a tear
but the ending made it fall it out
the ending was amazing as was the entire poem

This poem is very good apart from the first stanza, you need to edit it a bit.
"You were loved my everone
There was no reason for this being done
Every one has harships in life
So you took 13 pills and used a knife".

I think you mean in the first line, " you were loved by everyone." Overall it touches the core of my heart with sadness. Well done, 5/5, kel.

Good rhyme and flow, change the first line like suggested by Kelly and it's really awesome

5/5 JIMMY

365 days feels like yesterday....
best line ever :) 5/5