Those last lines amelia are Epic!!

I count sheep on more time
My sadness had finally crossed the line
Today I have had my final fight
One sheep, two, this is my last good-night

I luv that!!
Again, you always find some way to outdue me

Omg tha last stanza was powerful. GREAT poem!! keep it up.

I loved the last line It was awesome
Totally dark and out there
just wanting someone to hear your crys
just want someone to listen to you
I feel the same most days.
Loved it.
Take Care

-Kortney

I reallly loved the last two stanzas i found it as the strongest point and i liked the imagery as well nice work.

Your very talented for one so young,
i wonder if we have lived past lives?
Because some of us have a memory talent
far beyond our years,great write, keep in there,xp

Wow i love the last two stanzas they were amazing you really are a great writer 5/5

This was very sad, but really good at the same time! i liked reading it and it sounds amazing! keep it up and never stop writing because you have serious talent! would you please read and comment on my "scars" poem?? i would love some feedback.