Comments : Strongest

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Yea. If you could fix the 2nd stanza itd be perfect.
    But guess what
    STILL 5/5 MATERIAL
    Beautiful and unbelievable

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Now its perfect
    good choice of words in the 2nd stanza
    as i said before. beautiful and unbelievable