"I wish my mind would
speak and stop letting my lips
talk."

I absolutely adore this line!! Love the imagery involved. Such a sweet poem =) Great write && ly xx

Very deep keep up the good work

Your poems are always deep and sort of complex making them interesting and brilliant.
You're a really cool girl with a light that shines more then you know.
Keep it burning bright:-)

Aw that's so sweet, you dedicated some of your soul to me. I've never had a soul dedication. Lol. Its very pretty too. I enjoyed it very much.

Amazing poem, i love the line that lonely shadow said.
the imagery is amazing and it has a great flow
5/5

This poem is very well written and speaks of a high beauty. Very elegant and smooth-flowing.

I encourage you to read some of my poetry for some ideas and thoughts if you want to learn how to better express your inner emotions...

I can definately relate to this, it made me think of my fiancee and all the times we stared at the stars together and all the times I stared at them alone and thought of her. When you have love in your life everything is just that much more beautiful, it allows us to stop and notice the stars :) Great work 5/5