Omg, pure brilliance. loved it from start to finish. very easy flowing, and an understanding is grasped right from the start. your best work to date honey.

~IBE

Wow Ben this was really good. One of your best I think. It just flows so well. I really loved this. The whole idea is creative and very emotional. I wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up deary. Nik

Great work.!.Honestly, this was a great poem.!.
"I have my reasons to thro a fit
It's not enough to punish my wrist"
I loved the begining.!. Great job really(:

~Sadez

I love the rhyming Scheme i should try that one time!

I love the second line alot! and the poem 5/5 and I Favorite On My List