Amazing flow. 5/5
ive done it, im not proud but
i love you use of words sis

Thx
i didnt think it was good but i put it up. thx bro

I loved this poem :) pls keep writing

Way to go =) That was an awesome poem that was pretty easy for me to relate to.

And I think it's an awesome poem and it's close to perfect, if not already!

5/5

Well thank you. :)

Nice symmetry. flows really smooth

This is a great poem 5/5 it comes from the heart and i can feel the hurt when i read the words i have been there i know what its like to be there but u cnt let others control u that used to sound like a bunch of BS to me also but read this poem of mine i think it will give u some inspiration

My story
by David johnson