Beneath the green cherry tree
loking at the moon feeling that there's no gravity
walking in the middle of a cemetary
testing if my fate will end because of me

best verse to me 5/5 ;D

Aww thx bro

Lonliness is something that i have a lot of trouble getting over. people are like my poison and my cure at the same time. because some people seem to just put me down, but if i don't talk to people, i'll go insane from deprevision.

interesting poem. i didn't understand a few words though...

hackneyed, solilogirl (maybe perhaps it was supposed to be SOLOgirl? i have no idea what the other one is though 0_o

It rhymed though...and your right it was solo girl

Very well written 5/5