I really like this one.. I can relate to this alot.. there is good flow through most of it. Wonderfully written though

How sad. Your emotions can be felt in the words you have penned.

Now your walking away,
and I'm pretending i don't care.
I'm looking blankly at the ground.
saying i need you to be here.

The ending brought a tear to my eye.
Good job!
Take Care
Cindy

And just sit there,
- you should try and make this a bit longer .

Otherwise great rhyming , and I like the whole "sands of time" thing . You express yourself really well . 5/5

Now this was perfection! Great job with the rhyme and flow. While I was reading, I got caught up with the voice. A secret love all in its own, and I was truely amazed.

"I love the way you look at me,
as if I'm what you need.
I wish that you would take my hand,
and tell me about all dreams."
^^my favorite stanza

Great poem. I loved it from start to finish. So this one deserves a 5. Good job :]

I have that feeling of wanting someone to be with me. this poem somehow talks to me in a way.

it has only a few words written on it but, it hits hard.

good job. keep up. ^_^