Comments : Shared moments

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Such nice memories and then sadness. Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Though sad at the end, this was a lovely write indeed. 5/5. Countess..

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nice poem, can see you are going to be a great addition to the club. Nice flow , beautifully done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very beautiful. Yet so sad.

    The teary-eyed long goodbye
    feeling desolate and so alone,
    eyes heavy begin to cry.
    The moments that we shared.

    Love can bring us so much joy. Then can be one of the most painful things we will ever feel.
    Good Job!
    Take Care

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A beautiful yet sad write... Wonderfully penned. Great job :)