WOW, this absorbed me completely. Great writing. Still, I can't believe they allow this type of thing on P&Q, it's sooooo erotic and intense! Like porn! On your profile it says you're a guy, how could you be so in tune with lesbianism?

This is really well written and I agree with above comment, it is sorta pornographic.

Almost unbelieveable this is written by a guy, you seem to know so much about how a woman's body works!

You have talent, no doubt about it whatsoever. If you wrote a whole book with stories like these I would buy it for sure.

Let me know if and when you have made a story like this one again, I would love to read it.

God bless and take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Yes this is soo graphic but in a intense captoring way! and your a guy?

WOW you are every womans dream...i cant believe you know how the female body works and wants...this was BEAUTIFUL!

I LOVED IT

5/5 hands down!

Amazing!

Some of the comments say it was a little pornographic, but it was absolutley amazing so who cares, the graphic the better. Your writing really seemed to draw me in. Once reading i didnt want to stop and when it stopped i wished it went on. So great job and a well deserved 5/5

Ahhh...INTENSE images here! Exactly, I think, what is in every woman's fantasy. 5/5