Comments : From the Inside

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    So for the last time.
    I resign, I'm blind.
    Blind to the reality,
    Of each feelings fatality.

    Favorite Stanza!!
    amazing poem, ill be sure to recommend u
    ;) cuz im awesome

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the flow and rhyming thats pretty well my style haha most people complain about it and say "it doesn't always have to rhyme" but to me the great writers can get there point across and keep the imagery amazing while rhyming... you did a nice job with this piece great work.