This is really pretty, I don't know if i fully understand it but it seems like its about different religions and the struggle to decide which to follow.. I loved the ending powerful and if I understand it correctly the ending touched me in a personal way.. anyways great flow and the imagery was lovely as well... 5/5

Jenn, this is really beautiful...and the rhyming is perfect an excellent piece!

A powerful and thought provoking write...

I wonder if they'll ever see
That life is born inside of me

^^ they see but they don't want to accept the fact... or rather realise our imporatance...
i just loved these lines... so beautifully penned...

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