A handsome enemy?
Very nice poem and amazing choice in the title. IT was a good write 5/5

Most people think that love no matter how strong it is will be reason enough for that relationship to last forever. Most people are fools and have never really experienced true love, they mistake the "lust" for something greater. It takes a lot of hard work and sacrafice to make it work.... a lot of desire haha its not such a bad thing.... great job 5/5

I really liked this. The concept is so new and creative. I love the way you started this. It makes it very clear wht you and this person can't do and that adds depth to the poem. Most people would take a more cliche approach to this but you didn't and that makes me smile. I love the imagery and the simple words you use. I also like the metaphor you used with "oil and water" I think you did a wonderful job with this piece. It's short and to the point and doesn't sound like it's been done before. Very nice job hun. Nik