I loved this one. i liked the way it seemed as though it was all a lie/secret. it made me feel as if you were talking to me. very nice. this goes to my faves. 5/5

*Val

I liked both the title and the poem very much, you made it into an interesting poem, both due to the format you created, but also the wording..very thought provoking..all in all a very clever read:)

But secrets are always a lie
Made up so the holder of lock and key will feel like,
They are S P E C I A L to you.

^^^
Are they always a lie...mmhh..I am not sure..it is good you make your reader think.

The use of capitalised words with spaces in between is also a bonus, it adds to the impact of your words greatly.

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid