Comments : Twenty-one

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow, Lisa, that was beautiful, dear!
    I really loved it! ^_^

  • 8 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is a wonderful piece dear. I see a deep thought and life behind your happiness and moments you share here. I love the story you weave in and the depth they unfold.

    Beautiful;)

    Keep writing......!

  • 8 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is wonderful! I love how deep and all the emotions you put into the poem. I really liked reading it