Comments : Forgive Me

  • 12 years ago

    by TheRaven

    Dude this is tight....i love it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    These are words that almost every poet has lived before whether we want to admit it or not. I think you did a great job writting your emotions and they seemed real and not just a bunch of polished words. Nice write man, keep it up. Peace.

  • 12 years ago

    by KJ

    Wow. Good write. I was just browsing poems and came across this one. I havent commented on any today but I felt the need to comment yours. Great emotion. I liked the way you just kept it real, simple and sweet. Overall, great poem. 5/5