I like this one alot, though i wish you would have wrote a few more lines, i didnt want to stop reading, not bad. I can really sence your anger through this piece and the bad language kicks it up a notch to make the reader believe you are p***d off to the high heavens. good job. IBE

Great poem, could really sense the anger throughout that poem, until the last few lines. Really well written 5/5

I really loved this. I can TOTALLY relate. Great job ... keep writin and never ever stop girl! =D

--Hannah