Comments : Just Your Friend

  • 14 years ago

    by Kurt

    So true. Sometimes it can be difficult being "just a friend" of someone who you have fallen for. This write was emotionally driven and really allows the reader a glimpse of what you experienced. I loved the descriptions and how vivid the imagery was.

    "I could wake up
    And dream you're here
    Standing by my side, with tears in your eyes
    And I'll catch them in the palm of my hands
    I could even wash you free
    Whisper, I love you
    But I'm just your friend
    So I'll wait for you
    And go right on pretending"

    This stanza, I felt, was especially powerful. It touches on the most difficult part of mere friendship, wanting to tell them how you feel and yet, knowing inside that it would be irresponsible of you to put that on them. Absolutely wonderful job. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Maquise Paul

    Thats a sweet poem and enjoy it alot.