Comments : For sale

  • 9 years ago

    by Kurt

    Wow, that is incredibly deep. At first I thought the repetition of certain words was having a negative effect on the poem. However, after I read it a second time, they seemed to add sincerity to the writing. Almost as if to show the human side of the author, to make it less exact; more relatable. Well written 5/5 for sure.

  • 6 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    The poem itself is well written, the rhyming scheme was spot on and the flow worked perfectly.
    As for the was so sad and beautiful, your words are strong and pulled me in the more i read on.
    This was a very deep and emotional write, you did a wonderful job :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Dark Savior

      Thanks hero. It's something I've not done for some time. It's good to check back and see how these work.