Even though i read this late, im soo glad i did. this brought tears to my eyes. the hope, love, and longing there is for your love.
it seems as if there's no where else in the world to be, but near that person you love.
a beautiful, painful write.

-Liz

Wow, this is really good !! I loved it :)

Well I just read it cause it had won, but I don't know why just felt happy reading it, very nice poem.

This is Breath-taking!!!!

I <3 it!!

I find this very enchanting.. I found beauty within the dispair. 5/5

This is such a sad poem:(

If I tell you to sleep with open eyes
Will you still dream of me dying
Hold my hands and kiss my head
Will you still hear me crying

^^^ that was amazging...and brought tears to my eyes
Wow...100/100 for sure darl xx

Stunningly beautiful and sad at the same time.

Truly brings a tear to the reader's eye.

Great poem! 5/5 for you!

Interesting poem!

The first stanza is very powerful with emotion, it immediately grabs you and pulls you in. You brace yourself for the tragedy you feel you are about to read.

The second stanza then makes you feel lighter, bringing feelings of awareness. In the first line however, I read it while subconsciously adding a word to make it fit better for me.

The third stanza delivers what may be expected at this point; a mix of sadness and happiness. The hopes of this person make it sad, yet reflecting on memories possesses a bit of joy in reminiscing.

The fourth stanza, is a great ending. You are just as powerful, if not more, as you are in the first stanza. The last two closing lines deliver the concern like a solid punch to the face.

I really enjoyed reading your poem. You have good creative abilities, and definitely invest your heart. :) 5/5

Excellent one!

Super like!

A greatly rhymed piece oozing with bittersweet love. It hurts at the same time it has something so beautiful in it.