Comments : Our One Shadow

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Close to home, this is..both for the wording and also the scene it describes..I have written something very similar in the past, about making out under the boardwalk in the middle of the day, ha ha.

    Outdoor fun can be so exciting, eh?

    Well written, it was a delight to read you!

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Jackie

    A good poem, 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Hey Fran have you been peeking at my scrapbook? just reminds me of last Summer ahhhh What a Summer,lol,...xp Lovely work.

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this was such a passionate and sensual poem. You've expressed something very beautiful. Well done