My goodness this is beautiful. I'm dreaming of the day it happens to me lol. This is beautiful, well written. 5/5 from me, Em.

*awe struck* this was stupendous. *takes notes* i like how you described nature and how everything happened. every stanza rhymed and had good rhythm. the emotions expressed were so clear. its like i was there. this is really touching and deffinately deserves a 5/5

Oh, i saw this

I offer my hand,� which you take with a smile.

^weird symbol thingy