I adore this poem. Honestly, I'm not 2 fond of he way it was written. Like I love stanza's but that's my fault. I limit myself 2 viewing most poetry like that and that's not fair when I read it. It's not fair 2 the author. I am going 2 b completely honest (and mayb cuz I know u lol =P) I did love this poem despite the way it was formatted. (is that the right word 2 use? lol) I liked how u rhymed it all, I think ppl would get a better feel of the rhyming if u broke it up but that's just me still being narrow minded. The choice is still completely up 2 u. But over all I really did love this poem. Oh and p.s. who the heck was this written 4? O.o ... O.O ... ;P lol =P