Comments : Ya.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kurt

    This poem was incredibly heartfelt and emotional. The rhythm and flow help the reader along and keep a good pace.

    "A picture of your smile
    Is locked away inside my mind.
    Your face is so sincere,
    So gentle, sweet, and kind.

    I used to fear what would happen
    If ever, you left me...
    Now that I know, I want more than ever
    For things to be the way things used to be."

    Those two stanzas really broke my heart. It really tugs on the heartstrings and stirs emotions in the reader. Well done 5/5