Comments : Heart On My Sleeve

  • 11 years ago

    by Natures Calling

    Flowed perfectly. I also love how you used heart on my sleeve.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I can relate, broken hearts is just what binds us all. but I thought the way you wrote it brought out all your inner feelings, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Allanah Asphyxia

    I Can relate exactly... Again...
    You made me cry, :')

  • 11 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. this is such a heartfelt poem... I can feel your suffering and pain through your words. Its really good. Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    "I guess It's true, when they say love is blind,
    And I guess that's why, you left me behind,
    This will be the last time, I put my heart on my sleeve,
    Because you were the only one I thought I could believe. "

    Really loved these lines, very impacting. to me it portrays a very blunt image of those initial and sometimes long lasting emotions and thoughts you have after being left in the dark by the ones you thought loved you. 5/5 =D

  • 10 years ago

    by LaLaROX

    I could visualize your pain in this poem. You describe your emotions very well in this. Keep writing ;)