I thought it was good for the most part. I dont think that it flowed very well but thats alright. And i thought the overall idea of the poem was really great. Reading it reminds me of always thinking of me rapist, not sure this is what the poem is about, but it can be very relatable to alot of people. Well done 5/5

Then again, magnificent piece of work :D
LOVE the last stanza
perfect way to end it :)
very good read :D
woot woot :D

Keenan

I loved this. was so unique and really captivated the reader. I lovedd the introduction

"Then again, I felt that emptiness
raging intensely,
filling my thoughts
to remind me
of promises never made"
^perfectly worded.

You had great imagery, flow and overall it was a great poem. You are very talented. Well done :) 5/5