I still rem the first time i read it and it was so hard to control tears. Just like in all of your poems, everything comes crystal clear in front of eyes and i could feel all the pain, just like watching a movie. |
by Cherimari2
The poem flowed... I am not sure about meter...I am careful some of the time...others I just write as I please. But when I am being careful...I count all the syllables...to make the same for each line. Then I try to make the lines feel alike...i am not sure if that is meter...anyways... |
by Sylvia
Good job with the title you selected. It is sad and something we may all wish for to be with the true love of our lives. Well done. |
by Sneha
Isnt "where have all the flowers gone" a song by Joan Baez?? |
by Lady Nik
Lol the person above made me giggle. Anyways this was awonderful piece Cindy. Very sad but so well written. I'm glad I read this. Nik |
Oh dear lady, we have to hold on to life just a minute longer. Our mission on earth has not yet finished so long as we can breathe. |
by anand singh
Getting very tired now |
by Lana
There is so much sadness in your words but also something else, longing I think. That's the feeling I got when I read this, a sense of longing. |