Wow. there is a lot of grief you seem to be recovering from. i can relate to this in my own way, and it is true. fairytales and movies, are rarely like real life. nice finish.

there is one thing i would suggest changing tho.

"its better to show you I doesn't cry as a rain"

^this line didn't make much sense. ^ but i loved the rest of it ^_^

nice job
~Ben