I really like how this flows :] I think repeating the title was a good touch and shows how bad things were for you. Great work :] Nik

That was a really touching poem and your not alone as since I can remember I lost the fight....the fight to be myself ....until recently i found my strength and took the first steps in becoming me again.So don't give up it can be done!

I like the like for the words in this poem alot :)

Very sad poem 5/5