Comments : Fun Fare

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Mezmerising...very easy to lose yourself in the imagery..great job 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written, I love how you used the fun-fare as a theme to describe this evil person whom disguise as a clown. Though he enthralls children with his bright colored costume and sugary treats, unknowingly he also holds a hidden agenda to exploit the innocents. Overall I like how you penned this poem.

    Great Work