Spectacular flow. Each line transitioned into the next easily and fluidly allowing the reader to appreciate what the poem contained. The imagery was exquisite.

"Scared, alone darkness surrounds me
Your words shield me, silently I hear"

^^These two lines touched me very deeply. You really nailed the description of having the feeling that something, even if unseen, is protecting you from the despair and loneliness. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I believe you did a wonderful job.

Well done Cindy, should have won the title contest. (smiles) The safety of our mind is a good place to be, away from the dark. Good job.

How lovely a write this is. We have control over our own minds, and only we can choose to dream with it instead of have a nightmare. A 5 for me Mizz Cindy. a 5 for sure.

This is a very special poem and it has been since i read ir for the first time. One of my fav from you.
As in every single piece of yours....you just pours every inch of true feeling from the heart, translate it with awesome selection of words and create magic.
Beautifully done.

all the best and take care

Across the universe I hear
Soft echoes filled with love's light
Carried to me on Angel wings
Goodnite, sweetheart, goodnite

*This was my favorite stanz. Such a sad but lovely piece. I think you did a wonderful job with expressing yuor feelings and using the song tiltle. Very clear and emotional message. Great poem deary :) *skittle hugs* Nik*

This is really sad but really wel written. Everything went nicely. 5/5, Em

Very emotional and penned so beautiful.Your words always hit straight to the heart Cindy.
Paul...

Aww I really like your writing. they are so powerful. liked this was very touching xxx

Its a very touching poem Ms. Cindy