Courting is like a dance, clumsy steps at first, step on the toes, then as the two lovers begin to know the other, it smooths out and becomes a beautiful dance. Well done.

Anthony
I like the way you have taken the feelings of speed and the open road and combineded them with the love affair. Very unique way of seeing things. Great imagery and word choices. Made this a very enjoyable read.
Take Care
Cindy

I agree with Mel--really great metaphor. Interesting, original, and descriptive write. So many great lines in this piece..loved all your similies. You did a wonderful job, well done. (:

I like it