Olwin, I know the place over the rainbow, one that I long to be. This is so nice and sweet, a real love poem. Well done.

Aww how sweet and full of emotion. So beautiful and well done Olwin :]

Nice poem man like the ending

Olwin
What a sweet and tender poem of love. I know I'll be over that rainbow one day. I just pray my dream comes true before I go :)
Just beautiful!
Love Cindy

Filled with tender emotions of love. What i like about love poem is that it not captured just the eyes but the heart digest the words also. Very well done 5/5, kel.

This is really beautiful, if only dreams really came true. I love your writing, 5/5. Em