Comments : The Ground, It Weeps

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful write... vivid and lovely imagery capturing the colors of Fall, of the radiant sun and the lonely night... nature at its best...

    //Brilliance redeems its hue within these globes,
    Spotting foxes in the deep blue sky,
    Writing symphonies from the daylight's cry.
    //
    ^^ spotting foxes here sounds so innocent... loved these well penned lines :)

    Singing colors of the oceans tale,
    Another fox begins to fade
    Upon the floor of midnight's masquerade.

    ^^ a lovely ending to a beautiful poem :)

    excellently penned...