Nice Olwin. Brings back memories of Christmas as a child. It is just not the same when you grow up. (smiles) Now we have to enjoy the children. Well done.

The ending gave me chills, I don't know why but it did.. seeing your children's faces when they see what they got from Santa and looking back on how it used to make you feel. Such a sweet poem, this is really cute. Awesome job I loved this Olwin!!(:

Aaaaaaaaaaah, those golden days of childhood. Especially those christmas days. Can be a very exciting atmosphere.
Your poem really grasps the reader and makes him/her feel like a child again. A 5 for me.

A poem full of christmas cheer. Beautiful, 5/5. Em

Olwin
What a sweet delightful poem. All those wonderful memories of Christmas past. The children bring back the magic for me. Seeing their smiling faces and excitmemnt in their eyes.
Wonderful job!
Love Cindy